Poll: What would you say...?

I climbed up the door and opened the stairs,


Said my pajamas and put on my prayers,


Then I turned off the bed and crawled into the light,


All becuz you kissed me goodnight!








Next morning I woke up and scrambled my shoes,


Picked up my eggs and toasted the news,


I couldn't tell my left from right,


All becuz you kissed me goodnight!





That evening at last I felt normal again,


So I picked up my mother and called the phone,


I spoke to the puppy and threw Dad a bone,


Even at midnight the sun was still bright,


All becuz you kissed me goodnight!





Do you think this is any good?





Thanks!! ^_^

Poll: What would you say...?
WOW!! I love it I think its wonderful. I think good is kind of short to describe it. The lyrics are so awsome. I really really to hear in the radio someday.





4Real you are so talented!!
Reply:Threw dad a bone? lol


This is good.


You have talent, I can tell.


Do you write a lot of poems?


I would like to read more of what you've written.


Mike J


You're in my contacts, I don't know if I'm one of yours.
Reply:thats really cool, give us another!! xx made me smile... who gave you the kiss goodnight???
Reply:It's ok.
Reply:Sounds like something spike milligan would have wrote.
Reply:I like it. It says it all.
Reply:did you write that??





really good!
Reply:yeah thats awesome! did you make that?
Reply:Very good matey, got any more?
Reply:That is brilliant, sounds like a person truly in love.
Reply:That is so sweet!





If it is your own work, then it is really beautiful! You are gifted!!





lotsa luck! xxx
Reply:I think its Brilliant, did you write this, just brilliant....you are something else......love...
Reply:that is EXCELLENT!! i loved it.
Reply:I think it was a fun poem.
Reply:I'd say you didn't press spellchecker before you submitted. Now that tends to kinda negate your question some; is what I would say.
Reply:Wow! That was really good!!! You're very talented!





Your Welcome! ^_^
Reply:yes it is good. lol.


=]
Reply:That was really cute. I love it!
Reply:yeah that was really good but i liked that saying did you make that up or did you find that on the internet
Reply:young, swimmer, poet, lover, and British (Scottish)..... you are a man that is in extinction!





Today , the British men are really stupids. You are an exception!





it's really OK!





Kisses from Wales, UK.
Reply:Yeah its great!!! You've got talent
Reply:Yes I do. Made me smile and read it through to the very end.


I found it oddly touching.
Reply:Nice piece.!


-Published Poet
Reply:It's alright actually. Better than some of the deluded stuff that people are brave enough to type on here.
Reply:its ok lol


not the best ... but its up there ... definately my top 10
Reply:i love youre poem, did you write it youre self
Reply:I think it's awesome! =P
Reply:I love it! I think that it's totally sweet, and really cute. Whoever you wrote this for is one really lucky girl.
Reply:i luv it. i really do!!
Reply:It is so good you make me want to be bad
Reply:That should be a song!



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